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Saffierr GPB Member
Posts : 177 Points : 211 Reputation : 9 Join date : 2014-07-06 Location : In your house In-game username : [GPB]Saffierr
| Subject: Noticed few mistakes Thu Feb 26, 2015 12:45 am | |
| Basically, I had nothing to do so I just went through the admins applications. And I noticed pretty much bad grammar in the admin format. I might give you a few examples; "Since when you are playing SA:MP:" should've been "Since when are you playing SA:MP". "If you answer Yes for above question, then tell us the reason:" should be more like "If your answer is yes from the question above, explain us why?"
And this are just a few one I noticed.
I don't know who can edit it but, it'd be better. The formats from any kind of applications should be written good. | |
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Bear VIP / Donator
Posts : 1408 Points : 1584 Reputation : 48 Join date : 2013-11-15 Age : 25 Location : Madafaqin Finland<3 In-game username : Jallu[nL]
| Subject: Re: Noticed few mistakes Thu Feb 26, 2015 4:39 am | |
| - Saffierr wrote:
- Basically, I had nothing to do so I just went through the admins applications.
And I noticed pretty much bad grammar in the admin format. I might give you a few examples; "Since when you are playing SA:MP:" should've been "Since when are you playing SA:MP". Actually more like "Since when have you been playing SA:MP?" - Saffierr wrote:
- "If you answer Yes for above question, then tell us the reason:" should be more like "If your answer is yes from the question above, explain us why?"
More like: "If your answer is "Yes" to the question above, then tell us why?" | |
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Saffierr GPB Member
Posts : 177 Points : 211 Reputation : 9 Join date : 2014-07-06 Location : In your house In-game username : [GPB]Saffierr
| Subject: Re: Noticed few mistakes Thu Feb 26, 2015 5:16 am | |
| lol, your first sentence is good but so was mine, it doesn't really matter. But the current one is obviously not good. And your second sentence, you wrote "If your answer is "Yes" to the question above, then tell us why?" Is not 100% correct. The one I wrote is 100% correct. | |
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FroG Premium Member
Posts : 453 Points : 508 Reputation : 2 Join date : 2013-07-24 Age : 27 Location : Vagina In-game username : MADAFAKAPRO2006_._
| Subject: Re: Noticed few mistakes Thu Feb 26, 2015 1:39 pm | |
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[BR]Joker Head Administrator
Posts : 1236 Points : 1322 Reputation : 36 Join date : 2012-07-13 Age : 24 In-game username : [BR]Joker[nL]
| Subject: Re: Noticed few mistakes Thu Feb 26, 2015 4:04 pm | |
| Mistakes corrected.
If you find more, tell us. | |
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c00ld0c26 Head Administrator
Posts : 561 Points : 633 Reputation : 10 Join date : 2014-06-20 Age : 26 Location : Israel In-game username : [BR]D0c
| Subject: Re: Noticed few mistakes Thu Feb 26, 2015 4:21 pm | |
| I can check the admin app format and fix it, if faqa lets me. Usually im too lazy in game to actually write english properly, but when I want to, I can type without too many grammar errors. | |
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Saffierr GPB Member
Posts : 177 Points : 211 Reputation : 9 Join date : 2014-07-06 Location : In your house In-game username : [GPB]Saffierr
| Subject: Re: Noticed few mistakes Thu Feb 26, 2015 4:58 pm | |
| Yeah that'd be great cooldoc, If faqa lets you. And Joker, I probably will find more but cba. And btw, I saw more mistakes in the Server & forum rules. But I am glad you corrected the mistakes I noticed.
(())) Here I noticed one more, "Have you been admin in another server before? (If yes Rate your admin skills 1-10):" should be "Have you been AN admin in another server before? (If yes Rate your admin skills 1-10):" there should be an "an" written. lol I know it's just a small mistake but still...
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[BR]Joker Head Administrator
Posts : 1236 Points : 1322 Reputation : 36 Join date : 2012-07-13 Age : 24 In-game username : [BR]Joker[nL]
| Subject: Re: Noticed few mistakes Thu Feb 26, 2015 7:59 pm | |
| Corrected that too, Send me other Mistakes you found by PM
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